Orion guided a quiet Lorena to the car - her steps never faltered she counted on him to lead her safely
or had given up hope of safety
At his car -- he pushed her against his truck -- as he ran his hands over her
His fingers wiped away the traces of tears beneath her closed eyes
He leaned in close to her -- breathing her in and whispered
How much do you want this game to go on?
Will you take the next step?
will you quit on me?
Lorena shook her head "no" not knowing if she meant she didn't want to quit or didn't want to go on
She had almost forgotten it was even possible to end this
to open her eyes and end the game
Orion shocked himself with how much he wanted her - not just to taste her - to fuck her -- but to break her down
To tear off the last of her resistance
and see the slut inside
He was drunk with it
Orion reached into his pocket
and drew out the silk tie he had been fingering all night
dreaming of this moment
Unlatch the door
He felt her body shudder
Unlatch the door, climb up -- and place the blindfold over your eyes little girl
it's time
you're ready
be brave
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Lorena couldn't believe what was happening
She was there
pushed against his truck
his voice hot in her ears
his hands in her hair
she watched it distantly
through a haze
as she foggily measured the words
In one night
he had twisted her will
she had let him twist her will
and now
she realized she was considering
willingly leaving with her mystery man
who she had never seen
and knew nothing about
more than considering
she yearned for this strange man
burned for him
more than any other man.
She knew
that on the other side of that blindfold
anything could happen
everything would happen
it would be an adventure of a lifetime
she would have every dark fantasy explored
she would have excitement
and the dominance she craved
but she would never know
the rest of her life
who he was
He would haunt her
He would be every man she saw
and no man would hold a candle to him
he would be in her head forever
and she would never be free
and in one moment
she knew
she had to be brave
She turned her head up to him
and opened her eyes.
Wow- I am not even sure what to say- although I think I knew she had to open her eyes and am glad you took her to that place.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it great what happens when we take the chance and are brave!
Bravo Bravo Bravo!
~faithful
@faithful - thanks -- I think it was the only thing she could do and keep a grip on herself.
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That was awesome, terrifying, hot, exciting, and very well written. Bravo!
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@Julia -- Thank you -- it was fun to write!
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What a wonderfully sexy, fascinating tale. i think there's a lot here beyond the story, i think it speaks to all kinds of archetypal stirrings, and you did it so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteYeah, she had to open her eyes.
Sigh.
Excellent story. Thanks!
aisha
P.S. You should have seen Sir's face though, when i tried to give him a brief synopsis of it. That was pretty funny. You really have to read it to appreciate the story!
@Aisha -- thank you so much for all your encouragement. It really helped me to find the story. and I bet your Sir was puzzled.
Deleteit's sort of a fucked up fantasy
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Wow, I was on the edge of ... Um... Well I'm reading this in bed. But ... Wow. I was rooting for, that's the interesting thing, I would alternate. You had me completely captivated. GREAT job!!!
ReplyDeleteSQsmlb -- yes -- I have to admit -- as I was writing it -- I wasn't sure which way she was going to go
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I liked her and wanted what was best for her.
lol
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The hardest, most intense thing that I've read in a fuck-all long time!! BRAVO!
ReplyDelete(I would have opened my eyes, just fwiw!)
Your reasoning behind it is sane, logical...and oh so heartfelt. BRAVO, again! This was a delightful fantasy...and I loved every single word of it.
HUG,
nilla
ooooh Nilla -- you make me blush. You know I was working on him to make him "nilla-dark" - hot and scary
DeleteI'm glad you loved it
sfp
sfp, i loved this and I think it touches something in all of us, that one thing that stops us in cold fear yet revs up the adrenaline and pushes forward to face the dark desires!!
ReplyDeleteThank you violet - glad you enjoyed Lorena's tale of terror!
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