Sunday, December 2, 2012

Predator - A fantasy in 12 parts - part 1

"Karen, you can't just meet some guy you met on the internet! -- God! He could chop you up and stuff you in his trunk....you call me from the restaurant and tell me when you get home"

Lorena hung up and rolled her eyes at her friend's folly.  Imagine just rushing off to meet some guy she only knew online. If she were to have a motto - it would probably be "better safe than sorry".  Lorena was a worrier since childhood.  In any given situation she could imagine in technicolor a horrible end for any scenario.  Catastraphizing, as her brother would say -- seeing a potential disaster wherever she looked.

An unlikely contestant to be a sub, but ever since her former lover pinned her hands over her  head and ravaged her -- she was done for.

These days being ravaged was a distant memory.  

She shook her head a bit, as if to dismiss those thoughts, she was too busy to be a sub these days.  Work and family dominating her far more than she had time for.  

She pulled her hair back in a pony tail - pulled on her jeans and went about her day -- no sense thinking about how long it had been since anyone touched her or how she was more than a bit jealous that Karen was most likely going to jump this guy tonight -- it was time to get to work.

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He watched her walk purposefully out to her car, pony tail swinging with each step.  The prototype of a sexy librarian, a woman who has no idea of her affect on men.

Next she'll drive to the coffee shop - get a cup of tea - a Venti Earl Grey, one tea bag with ice in the top so she can drink it right away.  

Lorena was a creature of habit.  He stood in line 2 customers back and breathed in her fragrance and imagined having her at his mercy.  She turned and her deep brown eyes met his for a second over the top of her glasses.  She smiled the automatic smile of a shy girl embarrassed to be caught looking -- and quickly looked down as she passed him with her tea and drove off to work.

He felt the pull of her and knew he had to have her.

7 comments:

  1. O, my! Let the games begin!

    aisha

    {Yes, this is something constructive - isn't it?}

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  2. Oh, I'm in!!! Can't wait for part 2.

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  3. lol - thank you both - Nilla encouraged me to get this one on "paper" - and who could resist Nilla telling you your story idea is good one?

    we'll see if you like it as well as it plays out.

    sfp

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  4. Yippeeeeee.. Is Lorena a cousin of Naomi?

    ~faithful

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  5. i LOVE this. freaking LOVE it. See? You had to get this one out. Already I'm hooked. Off to read part two. Ya'll keep writing, k?

    :)

    a very excited nilla

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  6. @faithful -- oh no - Lorena would be completely shocked if she thought her cousin was kinky -- it would blow her mind -- imagine what her Aunt would say.

    But I do think Lorena would like Naomi

    @Nilla -- oh yeah - I'm in now -- this is fun!

    sfp

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  7. i've just managed to get some time in tonight to start in on this story... i've seen you updating but didn't wanna have to read and stop... so here I am. moving on to part 2 now.

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