Monday, April 16, 2012

quiet

Parsing the silence
I discover
the creak of my ceiling fan
the coo of a dove
the bathroom clock
tick
tick
ticking
the distant hum
of a leaf blower
I crinkle my toes
to hear my joints pop
and listen
to my thoughts
spin
spin
spinning
tomorrow's dreams

3 comments:

  1. That's fantastic sfp. " Parsing the silence.." - great imagery.

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  2. I like this A LOT!!

    hugs,

    aisha

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  3. thank you guys -- normally I can only write a poem when I'm unhappy

    but I'm finding that waiting
    even happy waiting
    lends itself to it too

    sfp

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